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Poems Writing 201 - Poetry

Trust: Acrostic & Internal Rhyme

Day 3: Is on Trust. My poem should actually be called distrust but because I started out to create the opposite, I’ll let you be the judge!

Trying to build the bridge across the ridge I
Rescinded on an earlier pledge to be free of love’s subtle sledge
Usurping peaceful currents and bringing torrents of
Slander, the pieces fell from my hands to pieces
Trust was crushed before it began at all!

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By imanikel

...a fresh slate or paper is a delight to behold, it practically beckons to me...begging to be utilized! With eyes that see and appreciate beauty in the midst of a crazy scenery...hands swift to pen what my 'wonder-filled' mind conjures! My name is Frances

6 replies on “Trust: Acrostic & Internal Rhyme”

Thank you!!!! I’m smiling so hard and almost blushing at your comments. I love it when what I feel is what the reader feels. (still smiling) 🙂
Thank you for agreeing that putting it as TRUST was better.

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