I’m not sure how the wind goes with grace, because it is a contradiction like an irony. But hey, just so you know, that there’s grace for you right in the midst of that storm.
Another attempt at Colleen’s Tanka Tuesday…loving it.
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4 replies on “Wind of Grace”
Oh, good one, Frances. Wind could be used as wind, as in twist or coil. The synonyms are numerous. I try to find words that have forms of nouns or verbs. It makes the Tanka so much more interesting. See, just like you found out. I can see you wearing a lacy dress just waiting for the breeze to lift your skirts! I loved your take on the words!!! ❤
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You got it! That was the picture in my mind. But then, it also speaks of anxiety and trepidation. Will the breeze be fun fun or one that gets in the way of things appearing to have grace.
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Oh, I love the way you think. That’s what I love about poetry, more than one way to feel the words. ❤
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Aptly said! With poetry “there’s more than one way to feel the words!”
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